Hello and welcome back! Today in class we were combined into groups of 7 to all collectively elaborate and share our ideas about our projects so far. We had to review each other's blogs and film opening ideas by sharing our opinions and tips on how to make it better.
To start off, I elaborated on my idea of a film opening. My film opening will be about a girl lying in bed on her phone listening to her mom's voicemail telling her that she will probably be home tomorrow morning from the party. The girl is frustrated about her living situation so she plans on run away, however, as she starts to head to the living room, she knocks down a glass bottle that was on the floor and wakes up a man, who may be her abusive dad or random man, and begins to get angry. While discussing the plot of the opening, my group members added on giving tips on how to improve the film opening a little better. They suggested that the girl should run down the stairs in a hurry to leave the home before knocking over the bottle, use mid lighting instead of low lighting , and to slow down the pace of action going on in the film.
After my discussion of what my film opening is going to be about, one of my group members, Ella, talked about her film opening. She explained that her film opening is about a teen girl who is neglected from her family and how she feels on the day of her birthday. While talking about the plot, we collectively as a group suggested some points. We suggested that she should end the film opening mid scene at the party to not make the opening seek too much as an official ending. We also suggested for her to include dull colors in the scene where she is neglected and then include bright colorful colors once the party starts to show the girl’s emotion going from miserable to excited and happy.
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